Like those loud music beats,
And vacant empty streets,
The course of our lives,
Is full throws of strive.
The fall of a giant,
May not be a matter faint,
But the bruises with blood,
Teach us to survive the flood.
The boat with a narrow hole,
May in its way down-roll,
But it teaches us to fight,
The current waves so might.
The scorching fireball rays,
May block our blind ways,
But they teach us to see,
In dim lights of life with glee.
The strong heavy downpour,
May flood our big ocean floor,
But the drops give us strength,
To live our life a long-length.
The fierce lightning bolts,
The earth crust it moulds,
But the burns teach us to feel,
Those happy moments we steal,
Our successes and failures,
Our desires and stay-lures,
And their crashing ends,
Teach us to all soft pores mend.
The broken heart pains hell,
We scream, groan and yell,
But it makes us realize the truth,
Of a patiently-willed hope fruit.
Huge lessons we learn to survive,
In all odds and evens to strive,
And life has it immense to give us,
So an orchestral symphony it is thus.
P.S. - This poem was featured here - http://morningerection.wordpress.com/2012/05/07/poetic-license-21/
I am just updating here in my blog because I just wanted to share with all my followers and fellow bloggers who haven’t read this poem of mine.

no matter how you treat life – it would leave no excuses to keep loving you back !
beautifully written verses !
Yes life is unpredictable!
Beautiful ending, amazing beginning, so wonderful imagery and what a concept!! How I interpret this is “Hope from everything even if it seems like discouraging you!”
And then the way you related this to symphony…..it’s ironically & uniquely great…..
Your interpretation is totally correct! The whole poem is ironical but it has its positive sides to prove life is all about hope!
Reminds me very much of songs from the Chronicles of Thomas Covenant by Stephen R. Donaldson. Lovely.
Well, I haven’t heard those songs! Looks like have to check them out.
Nice idea, I realy liked your poem good that you thought to let us share it with you again.
I love sharing.
It just increases the love between all the bloggers.
Aiiii this just beautiful!
Thank you so much!
beautiful flower!
Yes, it is!
Beautiful words that tell us of the tributes and trials of life. The options are either get into the rhythm and symphony of life or struggle against the flow of natures tide. Me I vote for the former.
Beautiful poem. Thanks.
Its better to get into the rhythm! That makes life worth living! Anyway, thanks for the read.
Lovely poem .. and perfectly rhyming too!
Thank you Annie!
Pretty poetry!